Friday, August 14, 2009

SENSE AND SENSATIONS

Hear the scream from the depth of heart
When the self go for meditation…..

Know the scorching breath and tears
When the mind searching truth….

See the ruined pictures of inner world
When the eyes meet global progress…

Taste the sweetness of venomous drinks
When the tongue slaver juice or words…

Touch the destroyed pieces of mirror
When the face needs a neat reflection….

Take a deep breath…
The wheel is going ahead….
Wheel is the symbol of motion and progress….
Remain any meaningful definition?!

2 comments:

  1. Please develop the sense you sensed while writing the line ‘touch the destroyed pieces of mirror ,when the face needs a neat reflection’ ….this symbolizes the inner poet in you. Concentrate this …and use more poetic dictions … avoid the words like global progress…. Inner world…. Symbol of motion etc

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